Hellooooo Shatin Junior School Year 5 Rhinoceroses!

June 7, 2012 at 6:51 am | Posted in Uncategorized | 6 Comments

What a fun day that was today – two fabulous Writing Workshops with the clever, creative kids of Shatin Junior School Year 5 working on Oral Narratives and Story Mountains! With everything from a brother turned rhinoceros which morphed into a T-Rex which morphed into a cow which jumped over the moon, to a rhino which ate toxic sausages thrown at it by the US Military in Shatin Central, we had an oral narrative drafting ball! Three more workshops to go tomorrow….I wonder what that Rhino will get up to next? Here’s a photo of us all with one of our story plans!

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  1. iam jacqueline ne of the sjs yr.5 students. i enjoyed your speech very much, ms/mrs.brennan

    • Well thank you Jacqueline! I enjoyed our session very much myself – it was great fun!

      • iam entering the competition mrs.sarah

      • That’s fabulous Jacqueline – I can’t wait to see your entry!

  2. I am Sherwin inY5 sjs. Thank you for your wonderful visit to SJS. I enjoyed your speech a lot.

    • Thank you for your lovely comment! I had a ball myself, so I’m glad you enjoyed my visit too!


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